Finale — Earned Visibility Edition (Shot Plan)
Creature Visibility Doctrine (Final)
The owl exists within the physics of fire and air. Visibility is earned through environmental light — chiefly the barn inferno — never through artificial key or rim. Across the finale the creature can be seen clearly for roughly 20–25 seconds total, distributed in naturalistic glimpses that escalate with the fight.
Finale — Earned Visibility Edition
- The Emergence (≈6 s): Locked 70 mm wide from the house. Roof beam falls, embers rise; a towering bird shape bursts out of the inferno. Register shoulder roll, head orientation, down‑stroke mechanics through heat shimmer. No score.
- The Glide (≈5 s): 135 mm telephoto as it struggles in the updraft, shallow arc over the yard, under‑wing detail lit solely by the burning barn; loses altitude, then drops.
- The Crash (≈6 s): 70 mm locked. Impact throws ember‑dust; a thrash, a half‑roll. Full torso silhouette against flame halo. Liv enters frame left. The animal is pitiable.
- The Confrontation (≈7 s across inserts): 50 mm over Liv’s shoulder; inserts: head lift, pupils reflecting flame; claws flexing; last defensive mantle spread with smoke. Liv fires three measured rounds. The body yields, embers fading.
- The Quiet (≈12 s holding shot): Wide static; wind returns; the carcass cools to silhouette. No score. Empathy, not spectacle.
Lighting & Exposure
- Fire (~1800 K) is key; expose one stop under to preserve highlight detail.
- Invisible UV edge fill on Liv only for separation; no added fill on the owl.
- Smoke is diffusion; depth via parallax of flame layers.
Editorial Rhythm
- Long static takes; no handheld once the owl is fully visible.
- Cut on event resolution — emergence → glide → crash → stillness.
- Average shot duration 6–8 s; no music.
Performance Language of the Creature
- Early: territorial, defensive.
- Mid: confusion and pain.
- Final: exhaustion; visible respiration, chest lowering once.
Shot Grid — Finale
| Phase | Lens | Duration | Notes |
|---|---|---|---|
| Emergence | 70 mm lock | ~6 s | Register anatomy via ember edges & shimmer. |
| Glide | 135 mm tele | ~5 s | Under‑wing lit by barn; loses altitude. |
| Crash | 70 mm lock | ~6 s | Dust/ember explosion; head silhouette; Liv enters. |
| Confrontation | 50 mm over shoulder + inserts | ~7 s (inserts) | Head lift, claw flex, mantle spread. |
| Quiet | 70 mm lock | ~12 s | Wind returns; embers die; empathy beat. |